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The Soldier's Lady

The Soldier's Lady - Jordan Silver

I didn't finish this.  I read to about 14% and returned it.  There is pretty much no punctuation, except for the random period.  It needs commas.  Lots of commas.  Melissa needs a spine.  And Caleb needs to not talk about his penis like it's a separate person.  Caleb also comes on very strong.  I would be thinking twice, if I were Melissa.