12 Followers
4 Following
kdhmhmm

kdhmhmm

Edged Blade

Edged Blade - J.C. Daniels

I've read the previous books in this series and enjoyed all of them.  I enjoyed this one just as much.  I'm not sure about the consistency of the characters.  Kit, the heroine, seems to be maturing and looking a bit more before she leaps.  Damon, Kit's love interest, seemed somewhat inconsistent based on the previous books.  He's there for her, but not all up in her business, which is a change.  But, I guess it's related to previous events.

 

The "job" Kit takes in this story is interesting.  It isn't fully resolved, but that's always the case.

 

I think some of the words could be cleaned up to make the story crisper.  There's a bit of repetition in the internal thoughts that Kit has that I kind of feel like it's going around and around a bit.  I'm really not sure how to explain it, but I've read enough books by this author to know it's her writing style.

 

I do wish there had been another couple proof readings.  I noticed too many misplaced or incorrectly spelled (wrong meaning) words.