This was short and quick to read through. The characters were kind of shallow. Maybe because the story was so short, but I'm not sure. Making the story longer might've just made is more maddening. Lexi is very self-involved and totally oblivious to Mac's feelings. I would says Mac's inability to tell Lexi how he feels felt out of character for him, but I don't think I got to know him well enough to know if that's true or not. Honestly, they behaved toward each other like high school kids more than the mid-twenty year olds I think they were supposed to be.