I found this to be disjointed. I had issues following the story. For example, I thought they weren't going out to the bar with Johanna's coworkers. Next thing I knew, they were at the bar with Johanna's coworkers. I had problems like that throughout the entire story. This was short. A novella, I guess, and it took me days to get through it. By the time I made it to the "suspense" part, I was ready to quit reading. I probably should have because the suspense part made no sense. There was no explanation that I recall concerning why the protagonist followed Baron and continued to go after the people s/he went after. There was an explanation for why it started, but not why it continued and forget about how the outcome was explained away. I gave two stars because I finished it.